This is my fourth review for college writing. This is a descriptive essay that we have done. Actually, it is a pairwork. This is what my partner have actually wrote. I guess not much to say that Mr. Adlan have already said that we wrote it in the wrong way. It should be descriptive not narrative. This is where the part I find this essay is quite tricky. I don't think it is that hard but it could turn quite tricky with our choice of words. It needs a lot of adjective in it that would descrive a certain situation. Thank you!
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