College Writing : Quiz 2 Review

Assalamualaikum :)

                     This is my result of quiz 2. I don't think it gave me much different from before. I do learn something all over this semester. I guess I am just bad at it. No matter how, I will do my best in the final. All over this sem, my problem is just with the language. I should have more vocab and efficient in making a concise sentence. When I answer this paper, I just misunderstood what actually is a descriptive essay. I wrote them in a really different way. That's why I get it wrong because I actually have a good content in it. It is just the way I write. That's what makes it wrong. I guess, I will try to learn all over about my mistakes and try not to repeat them in the future. Thank you!