College Writing : Quiz 2 Review

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                     This is my result of quiz 2. I don't think it gave me much different from before. I do learn something all over this semester. I guess I am just bad at it. No matter how, I will do my best in the final. All over this sem, my problem is just with the language. I should have more vocab and efficient in making a concise sentence. When I answer this paper, I just misunderstood what actually is a descriptive essay. I wrote them in a really different way. That's why I get it wrong because I actually have a good content in it. It is just the way I write. That's what makes it wrong. I guess, I will try to learn all over about my mistakes and try not to repeat them in the future. Thank you!

Review 4 : Descriptive Essay

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                              This is my fourth review for college writing. This is a descriptive essay that we have done. Actually, it is a pairwork. This is what my partner have actually wrote. I guess not much to say that Mr. Adlan have already said that we wrote it in the wrong way. It should be descriptive not narrative. This is where the part I find this essay is quite tricky. I don't think it is that hard but it could turn quite tricky with our choice of words. It needs a lot of adjective in it that would descrive a certain situation. Thank you!

Review 3 : Classification Essay

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                  This is my third review for college writing essay. This is classification essay where we have to classify certain topics into three big characteristics that will  cover all the things that we are talking about. As in this essay, I wrote about types of outdoor activities. I guess a lot actually went wrong in this essay that I gave the wrong meaning about the definition of it. It is stated there that I have a lot of language error. I guess I am bad at this too. Overall, I see this essay is quite easy to write but hard to brainstorm because it require us to denominate everything. Thank you!

Review 2 : Exemplification Essay.

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               This is another essay that we have done in a group. This essay genre is exemplification essay. Roughly, it is all about giving examples. We are telling the readers things that they already know and we want some approval from the readers. Our group decided to do examples of culture in Korea as our topic for this essay. Examples that we gave is their lifestyles, traditional arts and entertainment. We believe Korea is a strong country that could lead us to a lot of examples. Korea is already well-known with its name and that's why we choose this topic. We do realize somehow this essay is quite easy than other essay that we have learnt. We just need to give examples and examples even on the CI and SD or Elaboration. After all, it can be quite tricky too. The only thing that lack maybe from some grammatical mistakes. What ever it is, we are satisfied with our cooperation in doing this essay. Thank you, friends! :D

Review 1 : Definition Essay.

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                       As far as learning writing with Mr. Adlan. This is one of our essay that have been made by group which is each one of us were told to write a paragraph for this essay. Definition essay is one of the genre that we learnt. As far what I understand, definition essay is use to define anything and assuming that the reader don't know anything about the topic we wanted to write about. This essay could be easy but sometimes tricky to me. So, our group decided to choose Dr. Hannibal Lecter as our first definition essay. We choose to tell the readers about this topic because not much people know about him. He could be an interesting person to be tell about. From this essay, we could tell how to denominate each controlling idea with a good supporting detail. What can be tricky is sometimes the supporting detail did not fall under the controlling idea. But, to me, I believe we have did our best in using better words and sentences. I believe we can improve more with exercise. Pray for our final exam! :D