I believe this part will be quite long. Quite? Maybe. From the first page, everything is wrong obviously. I got no mark for section A. What a shame. I've never know that I'm not good with this kind of question. I don't even know how to differentiate between topic and the controlling idea. Then, Sir Adlan gave me the answer. Yup, I just knew about it. I'm the who should be blame for this. I should do more research about writing.
Move on to the page two which is Section B. The question is Studying in a study group can be FUN. Fun, that's the key but I insist to go with the study group. Got one mark for that question. Not bad, at least I did get some mark for it *cries*. The thing is, I should write, what is actually fun about study group?. That's it. It is not about the beneficial. Everyone knows about it. Study group in a fun way such as exchange information with minimap which is FUN. I was too confident about it. Question 2, Ummm that should go with what goes right. Teheee.
Now, Section C. The disadvantages of television. The longest part. I got some COW which means Choice Of Word. I really thought it was a cow because Sir Adlan put it on word Laziness. You know, cow and laziness. Yes, I was wrong. I should write unfit body or anything that's much more proper. Plus, I don't know how to elaborate more about the brain. I'm not a science stream students *cries again*. That's an excuse actually. Hihi. Then, I got some redundant. Well, a lot actually. I lost in the communicative problems. I didn't state about the television. I'm sorry, Mr. Adlan. I'm carried away by the question. Just realize that. I have some problems with the choice of word again. I need to read more. I am really bad with my vocab. Sorry again.
What goes right?
Not much. But I got some correct. Quite proud of it. Section B for question 2, not bad. At least I understand the question. I got 4 marks for the thesis statement. I did it right. Yeay!. I actually know about the physiological health issues. I know it is about physical problems. I remember that I learned it in my ERT (Ekonomi Rumah Tangga) subject. That's a good thing, I guess. For the Communicative problems, I'm only good with the supporting detail. I should improvise it. Lastly, Moral Decadance, I have a lot of ideas about it. It just lead to redundancy but I got some correct. I use some of Mr. Adlan has told me before about television issues.
I guess, that's it. Not much right. I got C+ for it. I need to improve my vocab, sentence structure and grammar obviously. I need to read more substance than english novels, I guess. No worries. I should do the best for the second quiz and final exam. I just need to learn more and do more exercise. Gambate!
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